Professional Proofreading and Manuscript Editing for Authors

Should a self publishing author consider professional manuscript evaluations, proofreading and editing. Yes. It is very important to have your manuscript professionally fine tuned otherwise you might find yourself receiving poor book reviews, unsatisfied readers and negative remarks about your book.
 
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Now a question. Can you find the editing problems in the above two paragraphs?